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Rayne, this is a beautiful poem. After mornings prayer this morning and praying the rosary. I read it aloud and meditated on your prose and imagery.

Well done.

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I really like when you used the Latin for the Our Father. It gives the poem a musical quality that I think would lack if it stayed in the English.

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Oh thank you so much, Phillip. Your words are very encouraging. I am so glad that this poem helped you in meditating.

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